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Original: 7/6/2009 1:46 AM
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Monday, July 06, 2009

.thump.thump.thumpthump.

 

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This dot musts'for amusement unfortunately
as the flowers of artichokes
render perfectly chaotic triangle patterns

like irrational reciprocal sums
that consume our aching hearts
exchanging love

for unattainable knowledge--
Fibonacci summations
of limitless virtues

shattering the sky
of our minds with senseless love
pretending to make
progress in our lives
while the flower unfolds spring
that fades in winter

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This is very beautiful.

i like the lines:

"like irrational reciprocal sums
that consume our aching hearts
exchanging love"

and

"while the flower unfolds spring
that fades in winter"

take care always.

-Patricia
Posted 7/7/2009 9:51 PM by patbus - reply

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I like the last strophe. The winter of love.
Posted 7/15/2009 11:31 AM by northernskylights - reply


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